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  This is a beautiful piece, the colours compliment each other well. The way you created the water looks very good and I like the way you created a splashing effect. The splats of colour in the background help to draw focus to the man in the centre. I also think the background adds emotion to the piece and even gives us an idea of what the man is feeling. The man's clothing is also very detailed, but I think the hand needs a bit more detail. Overall this piece is amazing, but I must say it does look slightly rushed.
Comments ah grazie for the kind words! I actually apply paint before any pre sketching so the style is very loose thus details, particularly the hands, are left to the imagination.
 feel free to browse more of my gallery any time! ^^ This critique was my first so I hope it was alright ^^' it was fun trying it out
thanks! Your stuff is awesome too  I'd love to be able to create expressiony stuff like yours! It was perfect! You told me exactly what I needed to hear, not just what I wanted.
Haha thanks so much! haha you will, this was all new to me. ^^ I have carpal tunnel syndrome which is basically where your hand hurts really bad because of nerve damage from drawing and other fine motion activities like instruments and video games. So I needed to loosen up from pencil and pen. ;D |
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