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Wading Wanderer by Yavanni

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This is a beautiful piece, the colours compliment each other well. The way you created the water looks very good and I like the way you created a splashing effect. The splats of colour in the background help to draw focus to the man in the centre. I also think the background adds emotion to the piece and even gives us an idea of what the man is feeling. The man's clothing is also very detailed, but I think the hand needs a bit more detail. Overall this piece is amazing, but I must say it does look slightly rushed.
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:iconyavanni:
Yavanni Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
ah grazie for the kind words! I actually apply paint before any pre sketching so the style is very loose thus details, particularly the hands, are left to the imagination. :) feel free to browse more of my gallery any time! ^^
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bunnyrabb567 Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Np :D I see :o I will do :meow:
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:iconyavanni:
Yavanni Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
grazie! you made my day! by the way, you' 're a pretty rockin artist yourself!
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bunnyrabb567 Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
This critique was my first so I hope it was alright ^^' it was fun trying it out :) thanks! Your stuff is awesome too :la: I'd love to be able to create expressiony stuff like yours!
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:iconyavanni:
Yavanni Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
It was perfect! You told me exactly what I needed to hear, not just what I wanted. :) Haha thanks so much! haha you will, this was all new to me. ^^ I have carpal tunnel syndrome which is basically where your hand hurts really bad because of nerve damage from drawing and other fine motion activities like instruments and video games. So I needed to loosen up from pencil and pen. ;D
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bunnyrabb567 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
I'm glad you thought it was ok :D oh I see, well it doesn't stop your work from looking great :)
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:iconyavanni:
Yavanni Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
Ah, grazie! I do appreciate your kind words! :) Hope to see more from you soon! 
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